——是新东方【潘赟】老师の课的笔记w
文章框架
三大段:
- 1.引出话题( + 图/表的描述、谚语说明、个人观点)
- 2.阐释话题(原因后果、对立观点、举例论证)
- 3.个人评论 + 建议措施 + 憧憬未来
开头段
话题引起
- 1.人们逐步意识到……
There is a growing/decreasing national/worldwide awareness of …
There is a growing national awareness of the phenomenon of University ranking in the comtemporary society.
- 2.过去几年见证了这样一个社会状况
The past several years have witnessed a social situation that …
The past several years have witnessed a social situation that an increasing number of high school students would like to study abroad after graduation.
- 3.近来,…的问题引起了公众的广泛关注。
In recent years, the problem of … has aroused/provoked(激起) wide/deep/profound(深刻)/great concern among the public.
Rencently, the problem of fake/misleading information on the Internet has aroused a wide/deep/great concern among the public.
- 4.所有人都注意到这样一个事实,…在中国已经成了一个普遍现象。
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that … has become a popular/grave(严肃紧张的)/ depressing phnomenon in China.
Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that the e-learning has become a popular phnomenon in China.
5.近来,…经常登上报纸的头条,引起了公众的热烈讨论。
Recently, it often hits the headlines of newspapers that …, which has aroused a heated discussion among the pubilc.Recently, it often hits the headlines of newspapers that the conflict between A and B becomes increasingly serious, which has aroused a heated discussion among the pubilc.
超强组合句要不要来一份呢XD😂
Rencently, it often hits the headline of newspaper that an increasing number of young people spend too much time on electronic contact, which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.
图画描述
1.正如图片所生动展示的,…
As is vividly shown in the picture, …2.图画象征性地表示了…
It is symbolically presented in the drawing that…3.这是一幅简单却有启发性的图画,在这幅画里……
There/This is a simple but enlightening picture, in which …4.某人/某物在哪里做什么(动作一),做什么(动作二)
(perp.)地点+动作一 + Sb/Sth,doing sth(伴随状语+动作二)In front of the job seeker stands a recuiter(面试官), holding his resume and saying “No” to the graduate.
正如图片生动地展示的,在黑板前站着一位学生、手中握着手机,准备求助技术支持去回答老师的问题。
As is vividly shown in the cartoon, in front of the blackboard stands a student, going to need tech support to answer teacher’s question, with a cellphone in his hand.
图表描述
图表的类型
+ 1.线状图 line chart
+ 2.柱状图 bar chart
+ 3.饼状图 pie chart
+ 4.表格 table
1.如表所示,…
As is indicated(表明,指出) in the chart,…2.图表清楚地说明了…的数据。
The chart clearly illustrated the statistic of …3.图表比较了A和B的数量。
The chart compares the number of A with that of B.这里的that指代前面的number。如果是复数就用those指代(
4.从图表中可以看出,…发生了巨大的变化。
As can be seen from the diagram(图表), great changes have taken place in …5.表中显示了…的数量从A到B这一时间段的变化。
The table shows the changes in the number of … over the period from A to B.
As can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in Chinese population who travel abroad.
As is indicated in the chart, the number of people in City A travelling abroad increased significantly from 10 thousand in 1995 to 130 thousand in 2005.
图表描述的公式:
As is indicated in the chart, the number of
主题词(n.) + 变化(v.谓,增加/减少) + 程度(adv.) + 范围(from…to…)
图/表 总结
1.这幅画虽然简单,却寓意深远。
Simple as the picture is, the meaning is as deep as the ocean.冷漠:indifferent = as cold as ice
伟岸:as high as moutain2.但这就是作者想告诉我们的(全部)吗?显然不是。
But is this what/all the author tries to tell us? Certainly not.3.这张图片虽然简单,但它传达的意义是发人深省的。
Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking.
provoke : v.驱使;激怒;煽动;
4.尽管这些数字看起来是孤立的,但它们之间却是紧密相连的。
Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely.isolate : v.使隔离;孤立;n.被隔离的人/物 adj.孤立的
引出谚语
1.众所周知…
It is (a truth) universally/widely acknowledged/known that…2.正如一句古老的谚语说的那样,“…”
Just as an old proverb/saying/remark/comment says, “…”3.“…”是句老生常谈,但我完全赞同。
“…” is a cliche(陈词滥调,法语衍生), but I totally agree with it.4.人们常说,“…”。讽刺的是,说起来容易做起来难。
People often say, “…”. Ironically, it is easier said than done.5.当听到“…”这句话时,我们很容易理解其寓意。
When hearing the remark “…”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.
People often say, “never judge a person by apperance“. Ironically, it is easier said than done.
It is generally believed that mutual(相互的) respect/understanding/help is not only necessary but indispensable(必不可少的) as well.
谚语解释
1.该谚语反映了…
This proverb reflects …2.我赞同…应该具有优先权。
I agree that priority should be given to …3.这句话展现了A对B的影响。
The saying shows the impact/influence/effect of A on B.4.这句谚语表明了…的确切含义。
The proverb indicates the exact meaning of …5.这条评论暗示了A和B之间的关系。
The comment implies the relationship between A and B.
This proverb indicates the impact of apperance on judgement.
This saying shows the impact of curiosity on successful career.
- 本文作者: 秋Chiu
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