——是新东方【潘赟】老师の课的笔记w
文章框架
三大段:
- 1.引出话题( + 图/表的描述、谚语说明、个人观点)
- 2.阐释话题(原因后果、对立观点、举例论证)
- 3.个人评论 + 建议措施 + 憧憬未来
中间段
中间段三种论证方式:
1.举例论证
适用于正面话题、个人品质类话题、谚语类话题2.因果论证
适用于题干有定论的情况=w=。
往往含有关键词:为什么?为什么好?为什么流行?3.对立观点论证
适用于题目中没有确定结论的情况0.0。
往往含有关键词:是否、是不是、要不要
交代主要内容(第二段段首,可省略)
1.显然,这句话可以与……联系起来。
Evidently, this remark can be related to …evident : adj.明显的
evidence : n.证据2.这幅画旨在告诉我们……
The picture intends to inform us that …3.显然,我们可以很自然地把这幅画与……联系起来。
Apparently, the picture can be naturally associated with …4.在当代社会, ……的快速发展已经成为了一种趋势。
In contemporary society, it has become a trend for … to develop speedily.5.毫无疑问,这个话题是为了告诉我们,应该给……适当的关注。
Undoubtedly/Without a doubt, the purpose of this topic is to show us that due attention should be paid to …
Evidently, this remark can be related to the relationship between curiosity and success.
Undoubtedly, the purpose of this topic is to show us that due attention should be paid to the effect/impact/influence of quality(素质) and degree(学位) on job applicants(求职者).
举例论证
1-3:引出例子 4-5:科学调查
1.可以给出的例子很多,但这个就足够了。
Numerous illustrations/examples can be given, but this will suffice/enough.sufficient : adj,足够的;充分的
2.人类历史中充满了各种各样关于这个主题的例子,接下来要说的这个是最重要的。
Our human history has been filled with a wide variety of examples on this topic, with the following one being the foremost.foremost : adj.最重要的;最先的;adv.首先
3.在所有与这个主题相关的感人事实中,最令人印象深刻的是……
Among all the touching facts relating to this topic, the most impressive one is …4.最近一项关于大学生的调查报告显示……
A recent report on a survey among college students states that …Ps:画下划线的部分可以替换为about/on sth…嗯总之结合具体情况啦XD
5.根据某国家权威部门最近的一项调查,……
According to one recent survey conducted by a certain national authority, …
Among all the touching facts relating to innovation(创新), the most impressive one is Jobs(乔布斯).吐槽:创新???感人???为什么我觉得这俩词搭不到一起orz
A recent report on a survey among college students states that almost 30% of graduate students choose to study abroad for further education.
Jobs, honored for his success in Apple products, is always remembered by his spirit of creativity, which shines through every chapter of his life.
- 本文作者: 秋Chiu
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