——是新东方【潘赟】老师の课的笔记w

文章框架

三大段：

• 1.引出话题（ + 图/表的描述、谚语说明、个人观点）
• 2.阐释话题（原因后果、对立观点、举例论证）
• 3.个人评论 + 建议措施 + 憧憬未来

结尾段

归纳总结

• 1.根据所有提供的证据，我们可以得出这个结论，即……
  Judging from all the evidence offered, we can come to / jump to / draw a conclusion that …
• 2.毫无疑问，我们必须进一步关注……的问题。
  There is little doubt that further attention must be paid to the problem of …
• 3.考虑到这一现象的各个方面，我们可以同意这个观点，即……。
  Considering every aspects of this phenomenon, we can agree with the idea that …
• 4.考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以合理得出这个结论，即……。
  Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to a conclusion that …
• 5.情况如此严重，我们是时候采取有效行动来解决问题了。
  The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective actions / measures to solve the problem.

  took这里是虚拟语气。

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that parents should take the responsibility to help children be independent.

The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective actions to solve the problem of excessive expense / cost (过度消费) on gifts packaging.

建议措施

• 1.大众媒体应尽最大努力报道……
  Mass media should do utmost to report …

  do utmost = try one’s best

• 2.我认为每个人都有义务采取行动来……。
  I believe it is every individual’s duty to take actions to …

• 3.我们的社会应该对……负责。
  Our society should take the responsibility to sth / of doing sth.

• 4.从根本上应该该制定和执行法律法规或政策，以……
  It is essential that laws and regulations (or policies) should be worked out and enforced to …

• 5.就……而言，我们应该做的是取其精华、弃其糟粕。
  In terms of …, what we should do is to absorb the essence(精华) and neglect(忽视) the drawbacks.

In terms of convenience brought by smartphones, what we should do is to absorb the essence and naglect the drawbacks.

Our society should take responsibility to enhance employment rate of college students.

憧憬未来

• 1.只有这样我们才能……。
  Only in this way can we …

• 2.只有采取这些措施，我们才能……
  Only with these measures taken can we …

• 3.如果我们从现在开始致力于……，在不远的将来，我们将不会被同样的困境所压倒。
  If we work on … from now on, in the near future, we will not be overwhelmed by the same dilemma.

• 4.通过这些方法，我们有理由相信，毫无疑问，这个问题，在不久的将来，就会解决。
  With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem, undoubtedly , will be solved in the near future.

• 5.伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。
  With a proper law and alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problems become things of the past(过眼云烟).

If we work on career planning from now on, in the near future, we will not be overwhelmed by the same dilemma.