——是新东方【潘赟】老师の课的笔记w
文章框架
三大段:
- 1.引出话题( + 图/表的描述、谚语说明、个人观点)
- 2.阐释话题(原因后果、对立观点、举例论证)
- 3.个人评论 + 建议措施 + 憧憬未来
中间段
中间段三种论证方式:
1.举例论证
适用于正面话题、个人品质类话题、谚语类话题2.因果论证
适用于题干有定论的情况=w=。
往往含有关键词:为什么?为什么好?为什么流行?3.对立观点论证
适用于题目中没有确定结论的情况0.0。
往往含有关键词:是否、是不是、要不要
因果论证
表示原因
1.许多因素可以解释这种现象,但以下这些可能是最关键的。
A number of factors can account for / contribute to such phenomenon, but the followings might be critical ones.(替换词)be the foremost
2.我认为下面这些是最好的理由。
I can think of no better reasons than the following ones.3.一些显而易见的原因可以列举如下。
The reasons, which are obvious to all, can be listed as follows / following.4.你可能想知道,为什么会出现这种现象?
Why, you may wonder, does this phenomenon emerge / happen / come into being?5.究竟是什么导致了这种现象?这是一个发人深省的问题。
What exactly contribute / lead to such phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question.6.缺乏对…应有的注意力导致…
A lack of due attention paid to … leads to / result in …A lack of due attention paid to interpersonal communication leads to the conflict between doctors and patients.
7.是…使得这种xxx的趋势应运而生。
It is … that makes this suprising / disturbing / depressing trend come into being / happen.8.关于…的政策或法规的执行可能不太有效果或低效。
The enforcement of policies or regulations about … might be ineffective or inefficient.
The enforcement of policies about controlling fake Internet information might be ineffective or inefficient.
What exactly contributes to such phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question.
A lack of due attention paid to applicants’ ability / inner beauty leads to misjudgment of good employees.
表示结果
1.因此,…可能会引发一系列严重问题。
Consequently / As a consequence, … might give rise to / generate a host of severe problems.2.事实上,许多人已经意识到了……
As a matter of fact, a large number of people have come to realize …the seriousness of …
the harm / detriment of …
the importance of …
the popularity of …3.因此,…的问题变得越来越严重。
As a consequence, the problem of … become increasingly serious.as a consequence经常用于描述不好的事情/_ \。
4.对于……,似乎有不止一种的直接或间接的影响,我们无法忽视。
There seems to be more than one direct or indirect effects on … , which none of us can fail to notice.5.如果我们对此视而不见,上述问题肯定会产生严重后果。
The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences of we keep turning a blind eye to it.
As a matter of fact, successful businessmen in large numbers have come to realize the negative effect caused by misjudgment on applicants.
As a consequence, the conflict between doctors and patients becomes increasingly serious.
- 本文作者: 秋Chiu
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